Book Review – Perdido Street Station

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Author: China Miéville

Publisher: Macmillan

Genre: Fantasy

Pages: 867

Rating: 4/5

Blurb: 

Beneath the towering bleached ribs of a dead, ancient beast lies the city of New Crobuzon, where the unsavory deal is stranger to no one–not even to Isaac, a gifted and eccentric scientist who has spent a lifetime quietly carrying out his unique research. But when a half-bird, half-human creature known as the Garuda comes to him from afar, Isaac is faced with challenges he has never before encountered. Though the Garuda’s request is scientifically daunting, Isaac is sparked by his own curiosity and an uncanny reverence for this curious stranger. Soon an eerie metamorphosis will occur that will permeate every fiber of New Crobuzon–and not even the Ambassador of Hell will challenge the malignant terror it evokes.


 

Here’s a book you don’t come across often.

Before I get into it, a bit of backstory: I went through this phase where I was fascinated by the -punk genres. Steampunk, cyberpunk, dieselpunk, whathaveyou. It took me a few seconds of Googling to find this novel, which I would say falls nicely into the dieselpunk fantasy genre. It’s a long book, and part of the Bas-Lag series, although you don’t need to read other novels to be able to understand this one. It can stand alone.

This book gave me whiplash with every page. The main character, Isaac, is a scientist who is dating some kind of…I guess the best way to put it is ‘insect woman’. Because the best I understood it, Lin is literally a human-sized anthropomorphic insect–of a race called the ‘khepri’. She is an artist, and they are deeply in love.

Next, there’s Yagharek, a Garuda. Those of you accustomed to South Asian mythology are familiar with this word, but in the desi context, Gardua is a great mythical bird (or bird-like man). In Perdido Street Station, the Garuda are a race of mostly desert-dwelling birdmen with an intensely fascinating set of ethics and philosophies.

The one thing that stuck out to me the most was the world-building. In fantasy, that’s always crucial, and this book has some of the best world-building I’ve ever seen. The sheer amount of detail packed into each page is awe-inspiring, not just in how it displays the writer’s attention to detail, but also in how readable it is. I never found this book boring.

I also really enjoyed all the characters, though I did think that they would have done with a little more development. That’s not to say that they’re underdeveloped or bad–quite the contrary. But personally, I respond to intimately crafted characters, and I didn’t get a sense of that here.

I took a very long time reading this novel. I started in September of last year, and I finished it in January 2019. This is because I was only reading a few pages at a time. The world-building detail I mentioned before? That did make things a bit overwhelming. This book is a bit like extra-rich chocolate cake. It’s so good, but you can only have it in increments, or you feel ill.

Would I read this again? Yes, absolutely. But…not any time soon. I finished it feeling like I’d climbed a mountain. I need a break.

The Wind Dance – Part 2

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Summary: In Lysithea, music and the wind are part of life. When good music plays, the wind twirls and dances in tune. But when the air itself is injured, the wind struggles to sway. Nicolo Callister is tasked with finding a solution, if his disease doesn’t kill him first. 

Fantasy/Action/Romance/Drama


Rohir took Nicolo to his room, away from the smog outside, making him sit on a plush sofa chair. They spoke little. To his credit, Rohir did not fuss or fret or baby him. He perched across from Nicolo at the edge of the bed, absently plucking at his cuticles as he waited for Nicolo’s breathing to ease. It was just a bout of coughing. Nothing too far out of the ordinary.

The window was shut, but the air outside was soupy and grey. Nicolo spied Rohir watching it, his lip curled in disgust. After about twenty minutes, however, the air had begun to clear, turning a sickly white, and then, finally, blue.

“What was that about?” Rohir murmured.

“I don’t know, but it’s the clearest sign confirming our suspicions. There’s no way a giant wall of smog is normal at Cloudhall.”

“Look!” Rohir stood, putting his nose to the window glass. Nicolo stood, and before them, the sky…had changed. They were flying over a magnificent garden, the bushes and trees bursting with newly-bloomed flowers. He exhaled, the glass crystallising before him. “It’s amazing,” he said in undisguised wonder.

Even from the distance, Nicolo had to admit this was the finest garden he’d ever seen. He could spot countless topiaries and manicured hedges, a bright red strip of roses, lilyponds, frangipani and marigolds and tulips and apple blossoms and— “I don’t even think half of these are in season,” Nicolo muttered as the ship flew close over the garden.

“Cherry blossoms!” Rohir practically shrieked, pointing out to a single, bright pink tree. “I love cherry blossom trees! There used to be one right outside my home! This place is incredible! I can’t believe someone gets to live here!”

Nicolo squinted as a shape in the distance grew larger. “There it is,” he whispered, as a marble white mansion came into view. “Cloudhall.” He picked up his violin case from the table. “Let’s go.”

Captain Arche was watching the gardens with her arms crossed. When Nicolo emerged to see her, she said, “Milord, there are already more signs of damage.”

“The air is clean?” Nicolo prompted. “I can breathe just fine.”

“Have you noticed any wind?” she all but snapped. “Where are the chantrari?”

“Wind horses?” Rohir asked, coming up from behind Nicolo. “I thought that was a legend.”

“They’re real, my father told me about them.” Nicolo watched the sky. It was so blue and so empty. “There should also be sylves—they’re birds that bring rain.”

The ship went around the mansion, parking at an airborne jetty. Nicolo stepped out first, followed by Captain Arche, then Rohir, and two of Nicolo’s bodyguards. The rest of the sailors stayed on their ship.

“Perhaps I read too many adventure stories as a boy, but there’s a part of me that feels like we’re walking into a trap,” Nicolo mused, stroking his chin.

“Stay alert,” Captain Arche ordered. “And Duke Callister, do allow me to walk first. For your safety.”

Nobody greeted them, and there were no guards—not that there would be. The Lord of the Air was not a martial spirit. From the corner of his eye, however, Nicolo did see a girl. He turned his head and watched the ends of her long white hair disappear behind a marble pillar as she fled from view.

“One of the servants,” Captain Arche explained, watching her go. “The Lord of the Air has many. They won’t stop us.”

They walked up the wide stairway and into the grand doors, which only needed a gentle push to swing open. There were more servants in the foyer. They were all wind spirits, without true physical form. Humanoid, their bodies consisted of gently swirling translucent air. Their hair was always white, and their eyes always black. Usually, wind spirits were excitable and constantly mobile; moving in bursts of speed, they appeared to turn into balls of air.

These servants, however, were made out of smoke. Awful smells: burning rubber, ash, petroleum, mixed together. A thin layer of dust covered the floor, and the wind spirits coughed as they staggered, holding onto railings and furniture to stay upright. As soon as Nicolo breathed the air inside the mansion, his coughing resumed in full force.

“Nico,” Rohir cried softly, rubbing circles over his back. “He can’t be here,” he said to Captain Arche. “He’s going to have an exacerbation if he stays here.”

“No,” Nicolo coughed out. “I’m the only royal among us, I need to stay.”

For a moment, Rohir looked like he might argue, but then he just sighed, and helped wrap Nicolo’s scarf around his nose and mouth.

Captain Arche stepped forward. “You,” she pointed at the nearest servant. “We represent the Lysithean government. Where is the Lord of the Air?”

The servant, mute, shook his head and dissipated into a cloud of smoke. Nicolo held his breath, but it was pointless. Violent coughing shook his body, his knees buckled with the force. Rohir tried to steady him, but it was obvious that Nicolo literally couldn’t breathe in here.

“We’re leaving,” Rohir snapped, turning Nicolo around. Even his voice sounded hoarse. The air was just too toxic.

From the other end of the foyer, someone said, “But you just arrived. Sit down. Have some tea. The young prince looks ill. Perhaps he should rest.”

The woman who spoke was not human. Her skin was as grey as bone shards after a cremation. Her dark hair tumbled down her back in a matted mess, her eyes were the colour of pencil graphite. The edges of her body seemed fuzzy. Like she was smouldering. The hem of her black robes tapered into a cloud of smoke.

Her appearance was marked by how the wind-spirits reacted. Many of them just collapsed to the floor in soundless moans, clutching at their throats and gasping. Nicolo’s complexion now somewhat resembled hers. His throat was closing, but he forced himself upright. He was a prince. He was the leader of this mission. He had a job to do.

“We need to speak to the Lord of the Air.”

“Oh,” the woman had girlish voice. She looked away, pouting. “Visitors for my brother. I incapacitated him.”

The admission was startling in its honesty. Captain Arche let out a short gasp, Rohir reached for Nicolo’s hand, but Nicolo himself barely even reacted. A corner of his lip twitched, and he narrowed his eyes. “Who are you?” his voice was much softer, much weaker than it should have been, but the woman answered anyway, smiling as though delighted to be asked.

“I am the Lady of Smoke. Whatever can I help you with?”

Nicolo regarded her, pursing his lips. “We want to speak to the Lord of the Air. You can help us with that.”

Beside him, Rohir made a face. “Now’s not the time for your sass, Nico.”

She circled the room to approach them, and as she did, the foul stench of burning rubber spread further across the room. Captain Arche coughed too. Rohir covered his nose with his hand. The wind spirits that could still move hastened towards the exits, slipping out from underneath the grand doors and the spaces between the windows and their panes. Others just lay on the floor, unconscious.

The Lady of Smoke didn’t seem to notice or care about the effect she was having on the room. She only glided, soundless, to Nicolo, and put a hand on his cheek. Her skin was as soft as cigarette ash. Nicolo’s head was swimming. He was going to faint. He could no longer breathe, and everything in the room spun, except for her terrible, inhuman eyes.

“I want to help you,” she said gently. Her smile seemed so genuine. “What can this immortal spirit do for a Lysithean prince?”

“Back away,” Nicolo rasped out. He slipped out of her grasp, collapsing to the floor in a fit of wheezing. Vaguely, he could feel Rohir call to him, feel hands on his back. Mostly, however, he felt the tightness in his chest, and the terror of her figure looming over him.

“All right.” The Lady of Smoke took a few steps back, and her noxious aura retreated by fractions. Nicolo still couldn’t stop the wheezing. He tried to pat his pockets, mindlessly looking for his inhaler, but in the next moment, Rohir had shoved one into his hands, whispering reassurance as he helped him use it.

Above them both, Captain Arche stared the woman down. “You’re what’s wrong with the wind.”

“The wind?” she hummed, stroking her chin. “I didn’t do anything to that little brat. She’s free to go where she likes, except she always tries to escape. So I have to keep her here. I didn’t touch her, but I confined her. Just like I did her father. They are both such terrible brats, aren’t they?” She seemed to be talking to herself. “I always try to be friendly, but they never want me around. They push me around! But I’m much stronger now than I used to be. There’s far more smoke in the air these days. I feel powerful.” She smiled widely, as though bearing her teeth.

“The smog,” Nicolo rasped out.

“That’s right.” She snapped her fingers. “Smoke is heavier. It keeps the wind-spirits grounded. And the wind…she’s such a little narcissist, she hates the smog. She won’t fly through it! I suspect she can’t.”

“Look,” Rohir cried, “we just came here because there were no wind trails when we played music. Just let the wind—”

“I hate music.” With that, the Lady of Smoke reached down to the floor, where Nicolo had discarded his violin case, and picked it up. She opened it, ever so delicately, and put her fingers on the body of the violin.

Within seconds, the polished wood turned to ash.

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My 2019 Writing Challenge and Other Updates

We’re midway through January 2019, and I’ve been keeping busy. I’ve challenged myself to write a short story a month.

This may not seem like a big deal for normal people, but the thing is, you see, I am an idiot. I have a lot more practice writing long-form fiction. I adore the medium and the freedom it gives me. So for me, writing a coherent story under 7500 words is practically impossible. Case in point: for the January challenge, my “short story” ended up being over 11,000 words. It’s so long that when I upload it, I’m going to divide it into two parts.

I also want to make accompanying art, which is even harder for me, because I’m not an artist. I am learning though, and I’ve made some improvements. But you know, I’m not very good at it.

All my short stories are going to be fantasy or science fiction, and I’ll upload them on this blog when I’m done. I’m also going to try and be more active with my posting.

Besides that, I have some exciting news! My debut novel, The Sunlight Plane, will be launched at the Hyderabad Literary Festival on the 27th of January (next week!) I’m so nervous. But it’s a good kind of nervousness, and I can’t wait!

Another one of my goals for 2019 is to begin violin lessons. But that’s a whole other thing. My short story for January, The Wind Dance, will be coming up on this blog soon!

 

 

A Portrait of the Darkling as a Villain

Last Friday, I finished the Grisha trilogy by Leigh Bardugo. I’ve written about this series before, not in the nicest of terms, and I can say with confidence that I did not entirely enjoy it. I wouldn’t read it again. In fact, I didn’t read it at all. I listened to audiobooks, because I knew for a fact that if I tried to read this series, I wouldn’t get through it. Reading is a far more immersive activity than listening, and I knew I couldn’t bear Mal and Alina whining about their love life all the time.

That being said, something still did keep me ploughing through these books. Why would I bother with this series otherwise? Truth be told, from his very first appearance, I was fascinated by the Darkling.

I’ve written about him too, but now that I’ve finished the series, I think I have a clearer idea of who he is. So I’d like to write about him as a villain, and consider what we, as writers, can learn from this character.

This post will contain SPOILERS for the Grisha trilogy. You have been warned.

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Book Review: Shadow and Bone (Grisha Trilogy #1)

Ughhhhh, okay. I guess we’re doing this.

I downloaded an audiobook a while ago. I like them, it’s the adult version of listening to a bedtime story. I put them on when I can’t sleep and if they’re read well, I get easily engrossed.

So I downloaded Shadow and Bone, by Leigh Bardugo, on my Audible app. It’s the first book in the Grisha trilogy, and I’m not convinced I want to read (or listen) to the other two.

Anyway, here’s the blurb for this book:

Surrounded by enemies, the once-great nation of Ravka has been torn in two by the Shadow Fold, a swath of near impenetrable darkness crawling with monsters who feast on human flesh. Now its fate may rest on the shoulders of one lonely refugee.

Alina Starkov has never been good at anything. But when her regiment is attacked on the Fold and her best friend is brutally injured, Alina reveals a dormant power that saves her life—a power that could be the key to setting her war-ravaged country free. Wrenched from everything she knows, Alina is whisked away to the royal court to be trained as a member of the Grisha, the magical elite led by the mysterious Darkling.

Yet nothing in this lavish world is what it seems. With darkness looming and an entire kingdom depending on her untamed power, Alina will have to confront the secrets of the Grisha… and the secrets of her heart.

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The audiobook has been narrated by Lauren Fortgang, who I think did an amazing job, especially with the voices of the characters (and especially with the voice of the Darkling, one of the book’s key figures).

But…uhh, the book…how do I put this…was not the best.

Here’s what I liked:

  1. The world: it’s fantasy fiction, so of course the worldbuilding and the magic is essential. I really enjoyed the world that the story was set in. I think the Grisha powers were well-explained and interesting. I was swept up in it, and I wanted to be a part of it.
  2. The Darkling: I’m not going to give you spoilers, but he is incredible, in any capacity, and one of the only reasons I’m considering putting myself through books 2 and 3 of this series. A truly fascinating character. I want more.
  3. The support characters are super cool, particularly Genya and Baghra. On that note, I really loved how many interesting female characters there were. I’m such a sucker for diverse female characters in stories :’)

Here’s what bothers me:

  1. Alina is an idiot. I’m sorry, I really am, I don’t mean to be glib, but the fate of her world is at stake, and she can’t stop thinking about who she wants to bang. I was sympathetic at first, because I don’t actually hate her, and to an extent, I empathise. But as the book progresses, it becomes more and more about which guy she wants to be with, despite the crushing stakes of the story.
  2.  Mal is the worst thing to ever happen. He’s the main love interest, Alina’s best friend, and a whiny little boy who just can’t stand that Alina has a life beyond him now. I found myself actively hoping for him to die.

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I find that when you can’t root for the main characters, your interest in a story is tenuous. So I’m really not sure if I should read the next book. It took me a month and a half to finish this one as it is, because I kept listening to it with the same enjoyment I felt while sitting down to do algebra homework. I’ve read reviews of the sequel, and there seem to be some new, interesting characters coming into the mix. So I guess I might…

As for this one, I’m just glad it’s over.